by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner
It seems as though I may have something akin to a “reader” at last, but I have some problems. I only gave her the first chapter and the second chapter is when things get spicy.

Even if she is ok with the spicy material, I’ve decided to totally rewrite much of the second act so…the clock is ticking. I’m going to have to hurry up. I can’t keep dawdling like I have been for so long.
I actually need to focus so I can give her something to read if she is still interested by the time she reaches the second act.
I’m a little nervous about her thinking I’m some sort of creepy weirdo when she reads the second chapter — the scenes in question are kind of spicy! But she’s young, so, who knows. She may be cool with it.
She was surprised when I mentioned that my heroine would go back to stripping again in the novel, so that makes me uneasy. But I guess I just have to power through and see what happens.