‘Dystopia in the US’ — #Lyrics To A #Punk Song

Dystopia in the US
lyrics by Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls
Please give credit if you produce or perform

I live in a dystopia
I’m told lies everyday
by the people in charge

I don’t wanna be
in
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US

we’re better than this
or at least I thought
that’s what I was taught
this shame is going to leave a mark

no going back I’m afraid
they’re going to come for you and me
once they get done crushing the immigrants
gunna make us all live in a cage
it’s all the rage!

I don’t wanna be
in
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US

(bridge)
how did things change so fast
leaving all our hope in the past
now it’s stand and fight
or just be another dog in a cage

I don’t wanna be
in
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US
the dystopia in the US

Some Idle Rambling About The State Of The Novel I’m Writing

by Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls
Insta: WriterShelt

I’m doing a lot of little videos using Instagram about the novel I’m writing. But here are some general thoughts. I’m about 40,000 words in right now and I’ve hit a moment in the early part of the second act where the sheer size of this project has begun to kick in.

I’m giving myself between 165,000 to 185,000 word to tell this story because I’ve been told anything past 200,000 won’t get published. The interesting thing is I finally am at a point in the novel where I rant about the Trump Era.

The entire novel is meant to be an indictment of the Trump Era disguised as a spy thriller. I’m really enjoying writing this novel. It’s just managing dates, characters and themes is tough when you’re doing it all in your head. I think once I finally finish the first draft things should move a lot faster. I’ll have the first draft to use as a stepping stone.

I have come up with a lot of ad hoc ways to manage development and writing, but none of them has come into any formal role yet. Again, I’m hoping it’s just a matter of time. In a sense, the novel is kind of Network if it was written as an homage to the Millennium series by way of James Bond.

Sorta.

There’s also a lot of Being There in this novel because it’s meant to be a snapshot in time. A time capsule of the few first years of the Trump Administration. Or, if you want to get rather dystopian — of the first Trump Administration.

I just have a lot — a lot — of work to do. A huge amount. It doesn’t help that I have no idea what I’m doing. I’m probably doing everything wrong. But the point is to finish something, anything that I can edit.

I have to believe in myself. That’s the chief thing at this point. I have to keep going. I have a really great conceit. It’s just a matter of fleshing it out over the course of nearly 200,000 words.

Wish me luck.

Idle Rambling About Making This Novel Dwayne Johnson Bait & The Need For A Center-Right Hero

by Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls

I’m generally pretty center-Left, despite my occasional rant about identity politics destroying everything, and as such it’s difficult for me to get outside my comfort zone and think up what this novel really needs at this point — for my Hero to be Brad Bird center-Right in his political orientation.

As of now, in the first draft, my Hero’s politics are pretty vague. In the second draft, however, I need to make it a lot more clear that he’s center-Right. If I were to do this properly — and there’s no assurance I will — I might be able to make the story a true “tentpole” and catch the attention of someone like Dwayne Johnson. Not that he’s center-Right, but many of his fans are.

I’ve said more than once that I want this to be a story that, while drenched in politics, one could actually read July 4th Weekend 2020 and it not even really register that how much ranting against MAGA — and extremism in general — was going on. Or, I could be kidding myself — this story is built from the ground up to be a proxy discussion about extremism in the Age of Trump.

But I really like Dwayne Johnson’s public persona and it would be fun to see if I could write a Hero that might catch his eye. My Hero — as opposed to my Heroine — originally was going to be a Walking Tall-type guy. But I got so wrapped up in fleshing out my center-Left Heroine, that I kind of lost sight of the need to make my Hero obviously center-Right. Because I hate, hate, HATE MAGA, I would have to, in effect, make my Hero kind of a good-olde-boy neverTrumper.

Or something like that.

V-Log: A Depressing Trumplandia Future

Some thoughts.

V-Log: My Personal Theory On The Trump – E. Jean Carroll Situation

by Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls

Some thoughts.

The End Of The American Constitutional Republic — An Electoral College Nightmare

by Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls

The fatal flaw in our existing system is there are physical human beings — 538 of them — who vote for president as the Electoral College. Given that Nancy Pelosi refuses to impeach Trump on moral grounds, if nothing else, what’s to stop Trump from using his dark money buddies to bribe enough electors to give him the presidency, even if he’s not on the ballot? In other words, what if the Electoral College votes for you to be president and you’re not eligible anymore?

Who’s to say you can’t be president, especially if you have FOX News and a dozens of insane assholes who don’t give a shit about anything but absolute power and “liberal tears?”

Once Trump — or whomever — was president at that point, they could as long as they were extreme Right nutjobs — sitback and control the Executive Branch for as long as they like. The military might be upset, but Turkey proves even that isn’t effective.

I think this scenario is the one that will happen, probably in 2020, or no later than 2024 when Trump simply refuses to leave office after the a bribed Electoral College votes for him en masse.

V-Log: Why The Electoral College Will Bring America Down In The End (Or At Least Bring About An ‘Elected’ Dictatorship)

Some thoughts.

Novel Development Notes For June 5th, 2019 — About To Finish the Second Half Of The Second Act Of The Scene Summary, Being Paranoid Phoebe Waller-Bridge Will Steal A Creative March On Me

By Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarls

This is a very scattershot, rambling talk about the state of the novel I’m writing and my low-key paranoia that the brilliant Phoebe Waller-Bridge will somehow steal a creative march on me going forward.

Novel Notes For June 3rd, 2019 — Pushing Forward

Some thoughts.

Novel Notes For June 2nd, 2019 — Developing, As Of Right Now, Is Going Well

By Shelton Bumgarner
@bumgarler

I’m now giving myself until July 1st, 2019 to wrap up development. But that’s really simply erroring on the side of caution. There’s a decent change I will be ready to write the official first draft of the novel a lot sooner than that unless disaster strikes.

Which, of course, it could very well do.