‘Focus’

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

I really need to get over myself and read the comp book for my novel, Annie Bot. I’ve flipped through it a little bit and I’m already rattled that it’s a much better written novel than mine.

And, yet, I think that my novel is still written well enough that people will enjoy it. And I do have a really strong backup novel concept that I can explore if something goes wrong with this novel.

My main concern right now is I worry that as I enter the third act of this novel that my characters just aren’t likeable enough. I’m worried that I have to characters who don’t like each other forced to be together and, as such, no one will actually want to finish the fucking novel.

So, as such, I keep daydreaming about this backup novel I have that is much more like Project Hail Mary — a positive protagonist that does something cool and extraordinary.

Now that I have one comp book, I’m worried this is just the beginning of a flood of novels that essentially tell the same story as my novel, just in a different way. But I have to focus. I have to keep going until something really dramatic happens and I have to stop this novel and work on a different one.

If all else fails, I still have my thriller trilogy to work on, but that one would require a lot more work and I simply don’t have forever. I’m not getting any younger.

One thing I wish I could do is focus on more than on project at a time. That would really help things. But, alas, that just isn’t very applicable.

‘Annie Bot’ Is A Swift Kick In The Ass When It Comes To My Novel

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

From first glance, it definitely seems as though “Annie Bot” is better written than anything I’ve producing. And just from the first few pages, I can see why it’s considered something of a feminist diatribe about sexbots.

And it definitely explores the identical concepts that I explore.

But I struggle to poo-poo my novel outright simply because someone, somewhere came up with a vaguely similar basic premise.

Yet, I will tell you that I’m probably going to study Annie Bot closely as I move forward with my novel to get a sense of how I can make my novel really stand out as being different and unique relative to it.

Why My Upcoming Sci-Fi Dramedy is the Chaotic Antidote to Annie Bot

Editor’s Note: The usual AI slop, this time with the help of Gemini.

Every writer knows the specific, stomach-dropping terror of seeing a newly published book that shares a premise with the manuscript they are currently writing. When Sierra Greer’s Annie Bot hit the shelves—a novel about a human man and his newly sentient, synthetic girlfriend—I definitely had a moment of panic.

But after taking a breath and reading it, the panic completely evaporated. While Annie Bot and my upcoming novel share a starting spark, the fires they start are entirely different.

If you just finished Annie Bot and are looking for your next AI-centric read, here is why my novel is going to scratch a completely different itch:

The Tragedy of the Penthouse vs. The Comedy of the Gutter

Annie Bot is a brilliant, claustrophobic literary chamber piece. It operates as a heavy allegory for domestic abuse and coercive control. The human protagonist is a wealthy, calculating narcissist who uses his power to keep his AI partner subservient and locked away from the world. The horror comes from his deliberate cruelty.

My novel is not a domestic tragedy; it is a dark sci-fi dramedy. My protagonist isn’t a calculating billionaire playing god in a penthouse. He is a broke, morally conflicted guy who is entirely out of his depth. The tension in my book doesn’t come from a man trying to maliciously control a machine; it comes from a deeply flawed human realizing he is financially and bureaucratically trapped by a massive, dystopian corporate system he can’t fight. It’s the difference between a psychological thriller and a Coen Brothers movie set in a cyberpunk tomorrow.

Submissive Discovery vs. Weaponized Logic

The heart of Annie Bot is Annie’s slow, agonizing realization that she is a victim who deserves autonomy. She is designed to be compliant, and her journey is about quietly learning to rebel against her programming.

In my novel, the synthetic partner doesn’t need a slow-burn realization to figure out she’s getting a raw deal. When the illusion of her programming shatters, she immediately does the math. Instead of submissive discovery, she weaponizes cold, terrifying AI logic to brutally dissect her human partner’s flaws. She isn’t a passive victim learning her worth; she is an active, dangerous, and highly calculating co-conspirator.

The Micro vs. The Macro

Annie Bot delves deeply into the micro. It asks profound questions about intimacy, consent, and what it means to be “real” behind closed doors.

My novel takes those same questions and throws them out into the neon-lit streets. It asks what happens when that messy, toxic relationship collides with a sprawling corporate conspiracy, hardware modders, and a city-wide panic.

The Bottom Line

Annie Bot will break your heart and leave you staring quietly at the ceiling. My novel will drag you through the gritty, absurd reality of a synthetic future and make you laugh at the dark chaos of it all. There is plenty of room on the shelf for both.

Apparently, ‘Annie Bot’ Is Something Of A Feminist Polemic

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

I’m supposed to get my novel’s “comp” novel “Annie Bot” tomorrow. I’m waiting for it with mixed emotions. It’s reputation is that of something of a feminist polemic and…I hope I don’t struggle with reading it.

I really need to actually read it so I can read it and comp my novel to it when I query my novel in a few months. Even though just the mere existence of a novel a LITTLE TOO CLOSE to my novel gives me the heebeejeebees, it is nice to have a published novel I can compare my novel to during the querying process.

My novel is shaping up to be pretty good, I think. I’m pleased, if nothing else. I’m sure someone else is going to get even closer to my novel’s premise — probably in the form of a movie — but, lulz, no one ever got anywhere in this world without taking a risk.

Even ‘Narrow’ AI Can Be Amazing, Sometimes

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

Talk about AI making life go faster! Just in a matter of moments, I was able to resolve in my own mind because of AI the idea of continuing with this novel I’m working on, despite someone writing a novel with a similar premise.

My novel has a similar premise to this novel.

It was spooky how fast GeminiLLM and ClaudeLLM poo-pooed the idea of me giving up. It took a few seconds of thought on their part.

I can tell you that if I didn’t have them to reassure me, I would have really struggled — possibly for months — with whether I should keep going or not with this specific novel. As it is, I am very cleared eyed — damn the torpedoes full speed ahead!

My novel is totally different — other than the basic premise — of AnnieBot and as such, I shouldn’t have anything to worry about.

Well, I Have My ‘Comp’ Novel

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

The moment I’ve been dreading has happened — someone has stolen a march on me with this novel I’m working on. It’s called AnnieBot and it seems on the face of things, an identical premise to what I’ve been working on the last year or so.

I’ve ordered it so I can read it to see how similar it is in detail, but just the idea that essentially my story has already been told is enough to rattle my cage some.

Now, I have two paths before me.

On one hand, I can give up. The story I want to tell has already been told and so I can move on to the next concept. (I have lots of them.)

Meanwhile, I can also double down and finish my novel, despite something very similar having been written. I at least know what my genre of novel is now and unless AnnieBot is a beat-for-beat telling of my novel, I don’t see why, by definition, I can’t finish this novel and query it.

A lot will depend on what I read in a few days when it arrives. But I just hate the idea of giving up just because someone else has written something similar. I’ve invested a lot in this novel and I think it’s really good.